☆ advent day 2 - Made My Bed, I'll Lie In It (Baekho/Ren, PG)

Dec 04, 2012 04:48

Made My Bed, I'll Lie In It
NU'EST, Baekho/Ren, PG, 725 words

Baekho and Ren cuddling for yellowesque. Title from The Maccabee's "First Love". ( advent calendar)

Sometimes Dongho sleeps with him and sometimes he doesn't. )

pairing: baekho/ren, rating: pg, fic: nu'est

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yellowesque December 5 2012, 05:39:39 UTC
baekho is a giant child made of sunshine and daisies and this is perfect. and i really like this whole paragraph:

...that's what bothers him the most. The imbalance. That he benefits from the feeling of his head cradled in Dongho's arms and for Dongho, he's just a glorified body pillow. Maybe, months ago, he wouldn't have minded if Dongho crawled into his bed out of homesickness, the need for company- if he'd done it because he wanted to and not because it was convenient for him.

boys are silly. but we've all been there. this is cute and light and just what i wanted, so thank you :3 ♥

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staygame December 5 2012, 22:43:13 UTC
I'm glad you liked it ♥ I'm sorry it wasn't more fluffy or anything but all I can seem to write about these boys anymore is dumb introspective pieces lmao.

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staygame December 5 2012, 22:44:35 UTC
Ughhh thank you bb, that is nice to hear coming from you ♥♥♥ I am super glad you liked it :)

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avirjin December 5 2012, 05:55:55 UTC
Sighing at you, because bed cuddling fic ;; and Minki calling Dongho a neanderthal omg ilusm ;; and ughhh I like how you wrote Ren in general and how he feels off-balance and like nothing more than a glorified body pillow ;; lfsfkdsj moooore /grabbyhands

Also, congrats on keeping up with your advent fic heehee :3

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staygame December 5 2012, 22:45:19 UTC
I was going to make it more fluffy but as all I can write about them is pointless stuff, lol. Where did all of my high school au ideas go?!

Thank you bb ♥

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avirjin December 6 2012, 00:50:33 UTC
Maybe the high school band trip AU dried you up lol

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staygame December 6 2012, 03:33:54 UTC
lol, you're probably right. no more room in my head for silly tropes!

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frailspells December 6 2012, 02:42:44 UTC
this is so lovely and quiet and introspective, and kind of melancholy even while being a really cute fic about puppies cuddling? i think basically what i'm trying to say is that i love the tone of this, and i love your ren and the way baekho confuses him.

:D

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staygame December 6 2012, 03:33:30 UTC
Thank you bb <333 I was aiming for cute, I don't know what happened!

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selayne December 18 2012, 10:23:21 UTC
I had actually given up on reading Baekren because all the fics I could find with them kind of sucked, but aw, this was really good. I like how Ren seems like the type who thinks too much and maybe is a bit more mature than Baekho even though he is maknae, it really fits. And the hint in the end that Baekho maybe feels something for him too Dongho could fall asleep in a second flat, but he always waits for him to get into bed first. He doesn't know what to make of that either. makes me a happy shipper n_n

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staygame December 20 2012, 22:05:55 UTC
the whole nu'est ficdom is a little sad ;~; they're so cute, why isn't that enough to lure in more writers? but yeah ren just seems really thoughtful to me, with like his answers to interviews and stuff- they're not quite the same thing you'd expect from other idols and that's neat! thank you ♥

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selayne December 20 2012, 23:11:51 UTC
I'm just hoping more people will join when they get older; especially smut can feel a bit awkward when they are all so young (except Aron of course. I think that's a reason why I like him so much, because he's the only member who's older than me. It makes liking nu'est easier) ^w^

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staygame December 21 2012, 02:27:37 UTC
cries they're all younger than me ;~~~; only by a year for aron which is probably the reason he's my favorite! also his face *____*

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