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Overwhelmed | Chapter 4 | Awe

Sep 09, 2012 01:11

Title: Overwhelmed: Chapter 4--Awe
Author: starzki
Rating: MA
Genre: Romance
Word Count: 1468
Summary: Kaname and Sousuke finally have all the time they need to come together and explore their feelings for one another. Spoilers for the series. Post Always Stand by Me, Part 2. Chapter 4: Awe: Sousuke is amazed at Kaname's strength and ability to survive all ( Read more... )

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Comments 2

manatsu_no_yume September 14 2012, 22:16:46 UTC

The birth-control thing was kind of brilliant, especially now that you said you thought of it in the long-run too.

I actually enjoyed the whole name-calling because it was another one of those moments where we see another side of Sousuke. The whole chapter with him fighting everyone, including Sofia - from the distance, was superb. He is such a bad-ass character.

"His eyes are so intense and his demeanor so serious that I could imagine Kaname just combusting under his scrutiny. It's just that sexy."
I agree. And I really need to applaud him for his self-control lol.

Looking forward to what's happening next :)

starzki September 15 2012, 04:31:18 UTC

Yeah, the birth control was probably the one thing I put the most time into thinking about. I've seen a lot of fics ignore it, which is fine for a PWP. But I wanted this story to be as realistic as possible, so that means confronting the issue in some way before hand. And this just seemed like one of the better options ( ... )