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starvinbohemian

FE Update! Really!

Jun 30, 2011 11:30

Chapter 10 of Forgivable Expectations is up! No, really!

Chapter 10: Peace Between Us.

Summary: "I forgot I was talking to a former member of the Inquisitor's Squad."

This chapter includes a scene between Pansy and Millicent that I've been sitting on for years because it kept getting pushed back into the next chapter and then the next. I've ( Read more... )

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Comments 8

;) anonymous July 3 2011, 01:33:10 UTC

I can not believe you updated, I think tears formed in my eyes I was so joyous! Great chapter, I loved the interaction between Millcent and pansy I feel like it was really needed in a weird way. Pansy and Dracos situation makes me sad :( I just want them to get back together and then on the other hand I want her to give him as hard of time as he did. Anyways great chapter, hopefully it gets updated sooner this time... maybe? :)

Re: ;) starvinbohemian July 3 2011, 18:51:02 UTC

Aw, joyous tears are always good. ;)

I think Millicent is an interesting mirror for Pansy because she acts out in ways Pansy wouldn't dare and she gets punished in ways Pansy dreads, etc. I love writing their scenes together.

True, Draco kind of deserves to suffer a little, but he's in a pickle now in the sense that Pansy holds the cards. The choice-- stay or go-- is in her hands now.

Thanks so much for sticking with this story!

anonymous July 17 2011, 01:56:58 UTC

I believe that you should update FE again :) After reading the story all over again and watching the new Harry Potter movie, it had me hoping that it would kick-start all my favorite stories into being reupdated :)...??

starvinbohemian July 17 2011, 20:51:09 UTC

Oh, I will. I'm working on chapter 11 as we speak. :)

Yay anonymous July 19 2011, 04:59:28 UTC

Now that comment about made my day :) Your story is honestly amazing, I've never read any fanfiction quite like it.

Re: Yay starvinbohemian July 19 2011, 07:01:39 UTC

You have no idea how much that means to me. Thank you. :)

ern115 July 19 2011, 05:43:32 UTC

I'm truly impressed with your dedication.

The characters in your stories make me really care about what happens to them, and I'm always glad to read more. It takes real skill as a writer to make a compelling narrative that doesn't depend on direct life-threatening action. ;)

Thank you for the update! When can I expect an original of yours on the bookshelves? :D

starvinbohemian July 19 2011, 08:16:25 UTC

I love your comments because they always make me blush. Thank you, truly.

Side note: Direct life-threatening action is actually much harder for me to write, lol.

Believe me, Bob, when that book is finally finished, you will have a copy mailed directly to you.