Comments | startredder: Took me bloody long enough

startredder

Took me bloody long enough

Jan 06, 2007 14:38

Suburban Nightmare is the latest Ninja and Roommate story, now available for your perusal. This long awaited tale of Erik's nineteenth birthday (which I wanted to have done in, uh, November) ended up being 9,299 words long and spanning eighteen pages in my word processor, which may very well make it the longest Ninja and Roommate story to date. I'm ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

tigersong January 6 2007, 22:51:38 UTC

Nice pants, button down shirt, collar open, no tie, and maybe a suit jacket? That's my suggestion.

Suburbia is VERY creepy.

Will read later, probably tonight.

startredder January 6 2007, 22:57:19 UTC

I approve of your suggestion!

Suburbia always strikes me as the sort of place serial killers live.

tsukikoushi January 7 2007, 20:15:06 UTC

Ray is always best when he's being inflicted on someone who's even worse. Erik's family terrifies me!

startredder January 7 2007, 20:20:49 UTC

There should totally be a fighting game where Ray talks opponents into submission.

I feel so badly, because there's /another/ story coming up with Erik's crazy family, and the effect seems to be that Erik has this horrible demon family, which isn't true at all! But Rowan's in France and there really isn't much entertainment value to be found from Erik's perfectly nice relationship with his paternal grandparents, for instance.

... And, well, it's Erik. When put up against Erik, just about /everything/ seems terrifying, because he's so hapless and dumb.

Not that this at all changes the fact that those particular relations are whack jobs. :3