Comments | starstruck272: Theme #15

starstruck272

Theme #15

Oct 08, 2006 16:08

Title: Storm
Theme: [#15] amazing kiss for ( Read more... )

fandom: xxxholic, fic: one shot, pairing: doumeki/watanuki, fic

Comments 6

sozuki17 October 9 2006, 17:45:29 UTC

Aww! That was so cute! It did seem kind of rambly, but it's Watanuki we're talking about here. And you did a great job at portraying him.

starstruck272 October 9 2006, 19:12:32 UTC

Watanuki tends to ramble a bit too much XD My beta kinda bit my head off until she realized I was writing from Watanuki's pov ^^;;

Thanks for reading~ =]

lunargeography October 9 2006, 20:22:25 UTC

Thank you for sharing!

I think that's a good solid, Watanuki voice. I think he does ramble inside his head, and I loved the Watanuki-logic (Did I need to remind him who made our lunches? *giggle*) Loved that Watanuki kissed him right back. Looking forward to more from you!

starstruck272 October 9 2006, 20:33:58 UTC

I'm glad Watanuki seems like Watanuki cause he really seemed very very rambly. Watanuki does seem the type to ramble a lot ne?

Thank you for reading XD

moonnymph October 10 2006, 03:12:42 UTC

I love this! :D It made me smile because it's just like Wata-chan (even on the rambly parts, my brain went onto auto-read, like how it does in the manga. I take it in, but it's like how Doumeki responds. "Shut up~" *plugs ears* XD). Still, I love fics when Watanuki's like "what the hell happened, I'm going to kill him, soijfajf..." and then yanks him back down.

Thank you for such a good read.

starstruck272 October 10 2006, 19:53:26 UTC

Watanuki does seem to like to rant and rave ne? He is also the type that tends to do things first and then thinks about it, and acts all impulsively~

Thank you for reading XD