Fic: This Meadow Where We Find Ourselves

[starseed4]

Title: This Meadow Where We Find Ourselves
Word Count: 541
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairings: Roy/Riza, mentions of Maes
Summary: This is their last day in East.
A/N: This fic is a lot of jumbled thoughts that I'm not sure came out right. I was thinking a lot about how things were much more innocent back in East before the homunculi made everything

Comments

[likeadeuce]

This is gorgeous. I love the sense of everything that's unspoken between them, and I particularly love the image of the dream at the end.

[starseed4]

Thank you! The dream was something I thought a lot about (the specific images and what I wanted them to imply), so I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[yoroshiqueen]

CAN'T TYPE FOR THE FEELINGS. I'M CHOKING ON THE FEELINGS.

[starseed4]

This is like the most coherent review I've ever gotten from you. Congratulations.

[bay115]

This is very lovely. I think you did well with Roy's feelings there and the dream at the end I too thought is a great image.

[starseed4]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! The dream in particular was something I felt to be really important in what I was trying to say, so it makes me happy that you liked it. It probably took me longer to write than the rest of the fic combined lol.

[jellyjay]

Gooooooorgeous <3

[starseed4]

Thank you! <3

[clewilan]

I'm speechless.
It was... wow.

[starseed4]

You're too kind haha. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!