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Fic: Infatuation of the Stars

Sep 24, 2009 18:08

Title: Infatuation of the Stars
Prompt: Written for pleuvoir for the alphabet meme (I is for Identical)
Word Count: 485
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Alfons/Ed, brief mention of Ed/Winry
Summary: Alfons dreams of constellations. Edward dreams of him.
A/N: I've had a brief outline of how I wanted this to go for a while now, but that outline was ( Read more... )

Comments 4

naive_wanderer September 25 2009, 20:58:15 UTC

Ohhh wow, very nice!! I adore this line: He wonders sometimes if this is how Winry felt while fixing his automail. Such a bizarre moment of understanding for Ed, haha.

Just lovely. :)

starseed4 September 26 2009, 00:59:37 UTC

Thank you so much! That line was somewhat of a late edition to the fic, but I really liked it when I wrote it so I'm glad you did as well. :)

littlefuji September 30 2009, 10:20:42 UTC

That was really great. :) I had a strong visualization of the entire story, and all of them are in character. I liked it.

starseed4 September 30 2009, 23:21:02 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.