Comments | starrylizard: Art and Fic: Close Enough to Burn (SPN, gen, PG-13)

starrylizard

Art and Fic: Close Enough to Burn (SPN, gen, PG-13)

Mar 12, 2008 22:18

I decided to have a go at spn_thur_nights Strike Haitus Contest and from my prompts of Sarah Blake, YED/Azazel (whatever) and Dean's (formerly John's) leather jacket I made this banner/art and wrote a fic. All comments welcome. :)

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Comments 13

stars91 March 12 2008, 14:58:17 UTC

Really wonderful fic! I loved that episode and I think you did a great job writing a coda to it! The way you wove in the the prompts was just perfect! Great writing/art work sweetie! Thanks for your participation and for sharing it with us!

starrylizard March 12 2008, 20:15:23 UTC

Thank you! They weren't in the same season! I was tempted to do some other stuff, but they all seemed too AU for the comm. :)

ravenrants March 12 2008, 15:13:53 UTC

Nicely done! Poor Sammy and all his nightmares...

starrylizard March 12 2008, 20:15:57 UTC

Thank you! :D

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starrylizard March 12 2008, 23:27:38 UTC

Yay! Thanks, Rinne! :)

iamstealthyone March 12 2008, 23:39:21 UTC

Poor, worried Sam. He bears so much guilt over and fear for his loved ones. *hugs him*

Good job capturing Sam’s angst and Dean’s concern. You packed a lot into this ficlet.

Favorite lines:

laughing a cold counterpoint to the hot fire that burns away all that Sam loves

I really like how you phrased this.

He snaps awake to find Dean hovering above him as if about to touch,

Aww. :)

Dean stops his progress out into the cold long enough to hand him a jacket. Dean’s jacket.

Such a good big brother. *pets him*

As Sam shrugs into it, it’s like coming home. It’s the smell of Dad and Dean and what they do.

Very nicely phrased.

starrylizard March 12 2008, 23:45:20 UTC

Thank you so much for your lovely comments! :D

charis_kalos March 14 2008, 01:26:01 UTC

Really like this; nice angsty Sam and worried Dean. I wish we'd got a bit more Sarah - she was a solid character.

(Missing Sarah and Ellen; liking evil "we should have angry sex" Bela; really could live without "I was human once" Ruby. See I can distinguish between female characters!)

starrylizard March 14 2008, 01:38:55 UTC

Yeah, I like Sarah too! I may write a longer fic with her in it later, but my every attempt to get the YED in there seemed to make the fic AU which isn't allowed in this comm.

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! :)