{Misfits} Shades of Discord (PG-13)

Jan 05, 2011 19:04

Title: Shades of Discord
Pairing: Gen; Simon/Alisha, Nathan/Kelly, and some Simon/Nathan if you squint.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: Around 10k
Warnings: Violence and language, but nothing you haven't seen on the show.
Spoilers: Takes place between 206 and 207, so spoilers up to then.
Summary: It was bad enough to realize he was the last one to find ( Read more... )

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calistomyth January 5 2011, 19:53:14 UTC
Oh, brilliantly tense :)
I couldn't help but burst out laughing when Curtis said "Not my best mate in the whole world!" and the following additions from the rest of the gang. Seriously funny! :)

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starry_orleans January 5 2011, 20:42:57 UTC
Thank you a lot! Glad you liked; I figured this was one of the only opportunities they'd ever get to praise Nathan unconditionally, so they might as well go all out. Thank you for reading! :)

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starry_orleans January 5 2011, 20:45:24 UTC
Thank you! I love the group dynamic in the show, so I'm happy I didn't fail horribly in my attempt. Saying it read like an actual episode is a massive compliment, so thank you very much! I'll do my best in the future to keep up the same quality. :) The adorable/angsty S/A is my favourite too, the kind where you're not exactly sure if there's hope at the end of the tunnel but you'll be damned if you don't try your hardest to get there anyway, haha. And man, I have nothing against Kano, I'll tell you that - Nathan just needs a scapegoat or two ;)

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flwrpwr_vampyre January 5 2011, 20:13:36 UTC
This is brilliant! Seconding the comment about how hilarious the team's reactions to Nathan's 'death' were. I laughed out loud like I was watching the show.

Loved all the little bits between the group. You wrote them so well!

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starry_orleans January 5 2011, 20:48:12 UTC
Thank you very much! It makes me really happy to hear you found it entertaining, because I aim for the kind of mixture of funny and weird that the original show is like. I'm even more glad that you liked the group dynamic; I'm continuously trying to get better at it, so it's good to know I'm already doing alright at least. So thank you again for reading!

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alittle2happy January 5 2011, 20:29:20 UTC
i love the gen-ness of this fic!
like it really could have been an episode :)

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starry_orleans January 5 2011, 20:49:35 UTC
Thank you! I love ship-centric fic as much as the next person, but want to try my hand at more gen-like writing too. It really is a wonderful compliment that you felt it read like an episode of the show, so thank you so much for saying that! Hopefully my future ones won't disappoint. :) Thanks for reading!

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jandjsalmon January 5 2011, 20:57:29 UTC
I loved this. I'm typing covertly on my phone from work so I can't write everything I loved... But I just loved it. Thank you for sharing it with us.

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starry_orleans January 5 2011, 21:33:30 UTC
Aw, thank you! I'm happy you took out the time to comment even on your phone, it means a lot. :) Thank you for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed!

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