FIC: The Blacksmith's Son (Arthur/Gwen, PG, 12/12, Part II)

[starry_laa]

The Blacksmith’s Son- Chapter Twelve Part II
Chapter: 12/12
Rating: PG
Pairings: Arthur/Gwen
Disclaimer/references: Merlin does not belong to me.
Summary: He has the hands of a blacksmith but a heart of a prince- if only she could see that. AU fic, in which Arthur is the blacksmith’s son and Gwen a princess- because being epic means being two pieces of

Comments

[kasie101]

loll go guinevere! and i love the quips about lancelot's hair. i must admit, he does have nice hair in the show, especially when it was long.

can't wait to see this fight.

thanks for posting!

[starry_laa]

Thank you, I'm glad you liked the quips! Oh, I do love Lancelot's hair, it's very Loreal-esque!

Thanks for your comment, and the fight scene is already up :D

[kasie101]

lol.....i really gotta kick the habit of being so careless.

and loreal-esque fo sho. i don't know why, but maybe its maybelline is going off in my head now haha.

[starry_laa]

Lol, you weren't careless at al!!!

Ahaha, did you see that macro of Arthur looking windswept being all, "Maybe he's born with it, maybe it's Maybelline?"

[sgmajorshipper]

Ahahahaha yes!! More fic *dances* I love, love, love it bb! And I was totally giggling over all the hair jokes. Seriously. Lets make fun of Lancypants (even though he really
does have nice hair)
And yay for Gwen, getting her inner 'kill the ursurper' on!
And the duel! \o/ I love duels.
And I say and a lot. But whatever, it's for the sake of reviewing.
:D

[starry_laa]

Lol, glad you liked the hair jokes, bb! Lancelot/Santiago does have nice hair, but Arthur/Merlin are jealous so make fun of it all they can, lol!

REally glad you liked all those bits and YAY for your lovely comment! <3

[mag2425]

Awh poor Arthur. He didn't know where he was going. Just like a man, he should of asked for directions.

*bounces off to next part*

[starry_laa]

*Points to icon*

I knew I kept that icon for a reason lol, thanks bb!!!

[mag2425]

*points to icon*

I LOVE that icon!!!!

XD

[hmsharmony]

OMG, bb, that last section with Gwen, Arthur, and Lancelot felt like something out of a movie. The back and forth, the witty comments...I was DYING of laughter (...and anxiety! I promise! I was anxious as well!). And w00t! at Gwen thinking for/defending herself. That's out girl!!

*off to read the rest*

[starry_laa]

I'm really glad you think so, bb, because I loved writing the banter so I'm really glad it seems like something out of a movie!

*Hugs you*

[reseda_3067]

This was really, really, really good. The last part, where Arthur turned up and they had this "banter", made me giggle. Very nicely done indeed.

[starry_laa]

Thanks so much, I'm really glad you think so! I'm glad you liked the banter.

Also, there's another part (part III) not sure if you read it? <3