"I dreamed about you," he said, looking into her devastatingly beautiful eyes.
"When?" she asked, shocked.
He reached for her, pulling her into a kiss.
"My whole life."
You have to love the cheesy line! (Sadly, I imagine a young teenage Remus being quite proud of himself for that effort, there, lol.)
flowed in waves down her back. She had curves in all the right places and legs that went on for miles.
I cannot believe I forgot those traits!
Honestly, one of these days I'll have to write about a girl who had curves in all the wrong places. There are only so many "right" places for curves to go - how badly out of place are the rest of the Hogwarts girls'?
Thanks! I was proud of that line! lol. (When I say proud I mean proud in the way that I laughed while I was writing it and was slightly embarrassed later, even with it being a joke.)
You should write a parody about the girl with the curves in all the wrong places. Like a fat head, tiny bust and GIANT ankles! I think it could be very dramatic. ;)
She had a tragic past, as most extraordinary young women do.
This is where I've gone wrong, you know. As well as not being young or extraordinary, lol. I do love the line about the gorgeous, tortured boy! Wonderful and it's spooky how you and seer_of_spots were slightly on the same, very disturbed wavelength. ;)
Have to see how disturbed I can be with mine at lunch time.
Don't worry, I'm not extraordinary either. I don't even like spelling the word. lol.
I know! I wandered over to her page and was quite shocked how alike they were. We're choosing to believe it's a sign of our complete awesomeness and not a glimpse into our disturbing little minds. ;)
I can't wait to see yours! I added your name at the last minute because I wasn't sure if you read Harry Potter, so I checked your profile and then put you on there.
I bet yours is going to be great! I'm so excited! lol.
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Bravo for the mysterious older sister of Harry Potter :D.
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I wanna do it again! lol.
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"When?" she asked, shocked.
He reached for her, pulling her into a kiss.
"My whole life."
You have to love the cheesy line! (Sadly, I imagine a young teenage Remus being quite proud of himself for that effort, there, lol.)
flowed in waves down her back. She had curves in all the right places and legs that went on for miles.
I cannot believe I forgot those traits!
Honestly, one of these days I'll have to write about a girl who had curves in all the wrong places. There are only so many "right" places for curves to go - how badly out of place are the rest of the Hogwarts girls'?
Excellent work - hilariously done.
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You should write a parody about the girl with the curves in all the wrong places. Like a fat head, tiny bust and GIANT ankles! I think it could be very dramatic. ;)
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This is where I've gone wrong, you know. As well as not being young or extraordinary, lol. I do love the line about the gorgeous, tortured boy! Wonderful and it's spooky how you and seer_of_spots were slightly on the same, very disturbed wavelength. ;)
Have to see how disturbed I can be with mine at lunch time.
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I know! I wandered over to her page and was quite shocked how alike they were. We're choosing to believe it's a sign of our complete awesomeness and not a glimpse into our disturbing little minds. ;)
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I bet yours is going to be great! I'm so excited! lol.
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Maybe when the fic fog from Hades finally lifts, I'll get back to you on it.
It does sound like fun.
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