I love the humour in this piece, especially the bar scene. Even though I haven't read your other stories set in this world, this piece stands really well on its own. Very entertaining, well done :).
There's only Ignition in this 'verse (other than Fusion here), which isn't posted online since I actually wrote it first as a joke prompt from selkath and later expanded and refined it for my fiction class. I really enjoy this 'verse though; it's a bit lighter and funnier than the original world, and so it makes me smile a lot more when I write in it! :D
And indeed, whenever I write Tasui outside of his office it is an absolute riot. One day I will write a series of snippets in which Tasui is dragged outside of his office through various means and the chaos that ensues. Poor Katsue. xD
Oooh, it all fell into place! I love how comfortable you are with your characters; the care you have taken to developing them and their world really shows in their interactions and dialogue. I hope you don't make us wait too long to read more about them!
I really like spon. combustion 'verse a lot; it's much more light-hearted than the original world and it is such fun to write (I am often grinning like a loon when I write in this 'verse, and when I am not I am smiling :D). It was pretty exciting to explore Shenek's interaction with Aika in this 'verse; in the original 'verse he's closer to her twin, but in this 'verse he's closer to Aika due to different motivations and whatnot. I will have to write another story set between Fusion and Ignition though; I was re-reading Ignition and there's a distinct gap where Aika and Tasui evolve at the moment, so perhaps there will be more soon! xD
Aaah these matchmakers, and conversing online! I wonder who (up there in the background heavens) wrote the script for them to begin... aaaah it's delightful. Utterly fun and delightful. thank you.
Aika and Tasui are wonderful to write. xD I'm glad that you enjoyed this story, since I had a lot of fun writing it. :D <-that was my face for a lot of the writing process, which is a rarity for me! :D:D:D I'm glad you enjoyed!!
ty for edit. Katsue's name should go die in a fire, clearly, for how many times I typo'd it. I swear, I don't usually do that! You can attest to that. :P
Thanks! :D The real protagonist of this 'verse is obviously the media. They're everywhere. And yes, that convenient bush outside Tasui's office window. I'm starting to wonder about it myself--it's almost a bit too convenient! xDD
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There's only Ignition in this 'verse (other than Fusion here), which isn't posted online since I actually wrote it first as a joke prompt from selkath and later expanded and refined it for my fiction class. I really enjoy this 'verse though; it's a bit lighter and funnier than the original world, and so it makes me smile a lot more when I write in it! :D
And indeed, whenever I write Tasui outside of his office it is an absolute riot. One day I will write a series of snippets in which Tasui is dragged outside of his office through various means and the chaos that ensues. Poor Katsue. xD
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I really like spon. combustion 'verse a lot; it's much more light-hearted than the original world and it is such fun to write (I am often grinning like a loon when I write in this 'verse, and when I am not I am smiling :D). It was pretty exciting to explore Shenek's interaction with Aika in this 'verse; in the original 'verse he's closer to her twin, but in this 'verse he's closer to Aika due to different motivations and whatnot. I will have to write another story set between Fusion and Ignition though; I was re-reading Ignition and there's a distinct gap where Aika and Tasui evolve at the moment, so perhaps there will be more soon! xD
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Aika and Tasui are wonderful to write. xD I'm glad that you enjoyed this story, since I had a lot of fun writing it. :D <-that was my face for a lot of the writing process, which is a rarity for me! :D:D:D I'm glad you enjoyed!!
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ty for edit. Katsue's name should go die in a fire, clearly, for how many times I typo'd it. I swear, I don't usually do that! You can attest to that. :P
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Thank you again for the comment! :D
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