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starlitscribe

Fic: The Important Half

Apr 29, 2010 03:16

Title: The Important Half
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters/Pairings: Eleven/Amy
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,054
Warnings: spoilers up to and including 5x04 and the 5x05 promo
Disclaimer: Characters are not mine, show's not mine, all belongs to the good BBC, no suing necessary. =)
Summary: Based loosely on the preview for 5x05 Flesh and Stone. With the Doctor's ( Read more... )

doctor who, fic: eleven/amy

Comments 11

parisiannymph April 29 2010, 08:40:52 UTC

love it!!

starlitscribe April 30 2010, 01:58:00 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it, and thanks for the comment!

honeynoir April 29 2010, 11:24:30 UTC

This is so beautifully written and so powerful! *clutches heart*

starlitscribe April 30 2010, 02:04:53 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! I'm glad to know it has that strong an effect, and I'm relieved that you thought my writing was ok (I rushed it a bit near the end and I was a little unsure about it^^). Thank you for taking the time to leave such a nice comment, it's so encouraging! =D

honeynoir April 30 2010, 07:48:37 UTC

I thought the writing was more than ok - it flowed flawlessly and your choice of words fit the feel of the story perfectly. :)

wuhdemah April 29 2010, 13:46:47 UTC

Oh, god, absolutely beautiful. I'm a bit incoherent right now. I hope the episode goes even remotely like this because it's wonderful! Great fic.

It would have been bitterly fitting, she thought, for Amelia Pond to die as alone as she had began, in a dark fairytale that had come full circle.

That line especially hit home for me. :)

starlitscribe April 30 2010, 02:15:26 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! Your comment made me so happy, and now I'm giddy because this is the first time I've made someone incoherent, lol. I hope the ep will be something like this too, except better of course. ;)

And yay! I was proud of that line so I'm so glad it worked; I was remembering Moffat talking about how Series 5 is like a dark fairytale and it popped into my mind. Anyway, thank you for the wonderful comment! It really means a lot, especially coming from such a talented writer as yourself. =D

tnbella April 29 2010, 14:20:09 UTC

This is a wonderful take on what might happen in the episode. I loved the descriptions you used to explain how the Angel's image was effecting Amy's mind. Amy's comment about the cricket bat to River was adorable (I can so see Amy saying that!), as was the Doctor getting Amy to focus on something good.

Brilliantly written. I hope you write more stories for this pair, because you have them down perfect. :)

starlitscribe April 30 2010, 02:37:24 UTC

I love getting awesome comments like yours, it makes me so happy. <3 I'm so glad you liked it! It's good to know that the whole Angel's-image-in-Amy's-mind thing worked, because I was totally making that up as I went along. xD And whew, I'm relieved that the characterization worked; initially I had some trouble finding Amy and Eleven's "voices." They're a bit tricky, especially since I'm an American and I was afraid they wouldn't sound authentic enough. Anyway, I'll try to write more for these two--it'll probably happen without me trying, considering that I'm obsessed with them and they've already yanked me out of a 2-year fanfic hiatus, lol.

Thank you so much for the comment and encouragement! =D

braceface_freak May 1 2010, 14:03:22 UTC

I loved this. So sweet and really in character! Honestly one of the best Eleven/Amy fics I've read so far :)
You should definitely write more like this :D

starlitscribe May 2 2010, 00:11:26 UTC

Honestly one of the best Eleven/Amy fics I've read so far. *melts from happiness* Oh wow, thank you so much! I'm honored and flattered. :D And yay, I'm so glad you thought they were in character. I'll definitely try to write more for them--I have 11/Amy plot bunnies dancing in my head as we speak, lol. Especially after watching 5x05!

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment, it means a lot! <3