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[starlingthefool]

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For the daily15 challenge, which gives one word every day as inspiration.
Today's word: patience
Notes: I'm not sure how I feel about this one, so feedback is welcome.
Copyright Nicole Cipri, 2006. Just let me say now that plagiarism is for assholes!

Comments

[briseur]

It's very good. Simultaneous elation & horror makes her much more believable. I like that Patience's patience is finite

[starlingthefool]

Thanks for the feedback. That's what started the whole story, and I'm glad that it came across.

[iateyourbrain]

ah like it!