[FIC]Shatter These Walls 1/?

[starlightshade]

I promised you fic this weekend, and even though the weekend's technically over in the part of the world I'm in atm it's still on at home base, so here you go.

Two notes in advance. First, I want you all to bow down to and hail the spectacularjg5799, whose mad beta and britpicking skills have saved you from going through a mess of misspellings,

Comments

[jg5799]

Happy to help! Very glad the fic gets to see the light of day/kinkmeme :) I like how Watson interacts with Sherlock here - think you nailed it. Good luck continuing!

[starlightshade]

Your suggestions made all the difference. It was like the light went on and something was shouting "But of course!" at me.

Thank you so much!!! *hugs*

[mme_saberage]

Amazing, thank you so much for sharing!
I can't wait to see where you're going with this...

[starlightshade]

Thank you! I'm pretty psyched to see where the writing takes me too (even if it's along the pre-set path of my outline).

[jenlee1]

Oh, my... this is an absolute delight. <3

Love the way you've handled the aftermath of Holmes's return, here - with both of them still on edge, feeling their way back into some semblance of their old relationship. It's tense and lovely and just a bit bitter, and strikes me as being very true.

So very nicely done, and thanks so much for posting here - I'm riveted! Looking forward to the next installment, whenever you get the time :)

[starlightshade]

Thank you! I just thought that not even the best of friends can take a blow like that without something giving.

I'll do my best to get the next one out in time (and the next one, and the next one...). So far it's looking good, barring any job-related emergencies.

Thank you for reading, and I hope this story can hold up!

Tuesday 3rd April 2012

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