His

[starkittyn]

Title: His
Author: starkittyn
Pairing: Harry/Draco, Harry/Draco/Severus
Rating: NC17
Warnings: Rimming, Felching, Master/slave, Dark themes
Author's Notes: There are quite a number of things about this fic that are unusual. One, I haven't written anything in a while. Two, it's written in first person. Three, this is a post-war changed!Harry story and it uses

Comments

[escapisms]

Holy fuck. So good. Soooooo goood. I looove SuperPowerful!Dominant!Harry and I even liked Draco and I hardly ever like Draco. And sort of Sub!Severus. Gah. Oh so many of my kinks have been hit in this. You done good. *melts into puddle*

[starkittyn]

Thank you. *hugs* I'm thinking of cross-posting it a couple places.

[meredyth_13]

Holy Bloody Hell!

I don't know what it was specifically about this that just wrenched me, but there was such an amazing, unwritten pathos to this story - which is the story of Harry, and what he's become, and what he's suffered and continues to suffer.

You haven't lost your touch, darling, and I love this abstract, intense little story a lot!

*snuggles*

[starkittyn]

*hugs* Yes, there is. I thought that when I was writing it. We don't really know what's happened to Harry but we know he's suffering. Thank you so much!

[spark_of_chaos]

Oh, how happy I am that you are writing again! I enjoyed this immensely, although I usually prefer milder versions of the D/s tendency. I have to say, as someone who writes only in 1st person POV, that you've done a a great job of it, succeeding in displaying Draco's entire soul bare for us to see and feel.

I only have to point that there are a couple of places where you've overlooked the capitalisation, although from the context it is rather easy to get that Draco is referring to Harry.

Thank you for that lovely piece.

[starkittyn]

*hugs* Thank you so much. I thought there might be a few places I needed to edit so I'm not surprised. Thank you again!

[fleshdress]

Oh so wonderful to see you writing again! I thought you carried off the first-person POV perfectly and your writing is as sumptuous as ever. You have a very fine eye for detail and it's all just beautiful. :)

[starkittyn]

Thank you sweetie. *smiles* It was lovely to write something again. I appreciate it very much.

[rosie_red73]

Oh wow, that was just beautifully written. I love your style, it's very poetic and it absolutely draws you into it. It's never been one of my favourite pairings but you've made me believe it. That's one thing I always liked about your stuff, the way you don't just dive right into the thick of it, you spend time making me believe the union, making me understand why it works. YAY! And did I mention it's also HOT?!

[starkittyn]

*nods* Thank you thank you. This is the kind of feedback I love because I know that you the reader got what I the writer was trying to convey. Thank you so much bebe. *hugs*