CERBERUS (X-Over BUFFY (Spander ) / NCIS, Chapter 1 / ?)

[starkat75]

Hey, guys!
Today I will post the first chapter of a new story. I don’t know yet how long this would be in the end, so we will see. 
First it should have to be a story for a challenge, but I got carried away with it and so it was too long for the challenge.
The prompt was this:
“Fashion can be bought. Style one must possess”
(Edna Woolman Chase)

Comments

[skargasm]

What an EXCELLENT start!!!

[starkat75]

Thank you. Good to hear that. :-)
Normally I don't write in englisch because I always think that my grammar isn't that good.
Does it seem right how I wrote the speech of Spike? I don't know how he would really sound with his englisch accent.
I will try to post the next part as soon as I can. :-)

[skargasm]

Sounds good to me!

[starkat75]

BTW I forgot to say there is a real magazine called *Girls and Corpses* who is published in Hollywood, if I remember it right. It's about girls who models with faked corpses and zombies.
So I changed the title to *Guys and Corpses* so it would more fit into my story. :-)