Simple Submission (Chapter 4)

[stark_black]

Fourth chapter in the sequel to Giving Grace. I'm very happy to be able to post this today. Just to let you guys know: night shift + army training all day + sinus problems from all the dust from the move = not happy Stark. But thanks to haru_42, who so gallantly took my shift at work tonight, posting is again possible. xD

Comments

[crabby_crab]

WIN! I can only say win! I saw the next chapter was up and literally said, "Fucking win!" Eehee, happy.

And sexy time isn't even over! You give us more?! This pairing is really adorable, and I can't even believe this was written by two people, it flows so well.

Props to you both! You just made my night. And perhaps my dreams...? Mmmmm. (Hopefully that sounded only moderately creepy XD )

[liralen]

*laughs*

We *like* doing aftercare... it's a very sweet part of any scene.

I'm glad that you found the flow worked well, both stark and I have tried very hard to meld our styles where and how we can.

*giggles at the last* not too creepy. Have a good night. I should get to sleep, too...

[serenia]

Shuuhei is so lucky!
Jealous ramblings aside, I think I've mentioned before, I like how well-researched this is, and how Ukitake sticks to the SSC rules.

[liralen]

*grins* I'm very glad that you understand that Ukitake is sticking to some pretty solid rules of engagement in this. Both stark and I have had some experiences with the Scene, and this particular Ukitake is definitely an off-shoot of my experiences.

I've been sticking pretty closely to the rules for informed consent with all my bdsm fics, as I'd gotten a little tired of all the fics that seem to throw all that out the window... or... more likely just don't understand that there are rules in the first place.

So I really appreciate your informed comment on this. *grins* Thank you.

[madrona_8]

I was just about to go to bed and there it was, the part I had been aching for. I still love the way your Ukitake is this wise strong sexy man with the power to bring Shuuhei to tears of ....joy? I love this pairing.

[liralen]

*grins* Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed him.

Stark's Shuuhei is always a joy to play against, and it really helped that Stark did a lot to show that Shuuhei really was enjoying himself as well.

Ever since that scene on the cliff over the area where Rukia and Orihime were practicing, I have really liked this pairing, too...

[chorus_of_chaos]

chapter 3 link is coming up

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wahhhhhh...buuuuuu

[liralen]

Uhm....

Here is a listing of other sites and links to find that chapter. I hope you can use one of those?

[chorus_of_chaos]

the fanfiction net one works, yay!!! Sorry it took me so long to get back to you...thanks for giving the other link sites! **dashes off to read**

[liralen]

Coolness. Glad that you got to read it.

[xxlanaxx]

*is melted puddle on the floor*

omg! me shouting harder and faster worked!

i love how you guys describe all the sensations, the detail is what makes it. omg i think im gonna have to lie down for a bit to recover

[liralen]

It did, didn't it?

Isn't that amazing!

*giggles* I'm so glad that it worked for you... and that the details really helped. Stark was really great at describing how things felt for Shuuhei.

Thank you for the lovely comment!!