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stark_black

Simple Submission (Chapter 1)

May 20, 2009 00:37

Here is the sequel to liralen and my RP Giving Grace. We had planned on doing a second part of this from the get go, it's just been really long in the writing. Life does that, grrr. But I am pleased to be posting this today! This was a lot of hard work, (especially for Lira-san with all the edits and changes and dealing with my computer retardedness and ( Read more... )

shuu/ukitake, fanfic, bleach

Comments 22

2metaldog May 19 2009, 21:02:02 UTC

I'm glad I could help you guys out and it was a pleasure working with you both. I also loved the whole sneak peak aspect *grins*. Without spoiling for anyone, I enjoyed this very much and look forward to you guys doing the last bit at some time in the future.

liralen May 19 2009, 23:23:39 UTC

*hugs happily* I'm so very glad that you enjoyed working with us, you were a real joy to work with, and caught a lot of things both of us missed.

Thank you, so much!!

2metaldog May 20 2009, 00:26:48 UTC

Any time.

ravens_rising May 20 2009, 00:22:25 UTC

...<333
This was WONDERFUL. <3 Perfect characterization as always. Love love love. I can't wait to see where this goes. <333

liralen May 20 2009, 01:15:47 UTC

*happies* Thank you so much!

I'm glad it pleased, and, yes, it's all done, so we know we can post it all.

madrona_8 May 20 2009, 00:29:19 UTC

I love these two together. I love how Ukitake Taichou become Ukitake Sensei. I really like how Ukitake is so sexual but in a very subdued manner. In contrast, we have Hisagi with his tattoo who is still blushing and shy when confronting him.

liralen May 20 2009, 01:16:46 UTC

*bows gently*

Thank you, so much! I'm very glad that you see my Ukitake that way, and yeah, it's fun seeing Hisagi blush. Stark's Shuuhei is really fun to play against.

sakura_nii_chan May 20 2009, 02:14:21 UTC

aw it was heartwarming, deep down we all want to be comforted by Ukitake, its such a good pairing

liralen May 20 2009, 03:07:22 UTC

Ukitake is such a steadying influence. *grins* Thank you, so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed this.

xxlanaxx May 20 2009, 09:04:12 UTC

OMG! I'm SO glad you guys are writing more of these two, I can't get enough of them!

This is brilliant, the way you set out the scene and everything and all the little things, its the little details that make a big picture.

I love it

liralen May 20 2009, 22:12:46 UTC

*smiles* I'm so glad they pleased!! Yeah, it's really cool working with Stark as she's good with the details as well... it's a lot of fun.

Thank you!!

xxlanaxx May 21 2009, 01:58:31 UTC

don't do yourself a disservice, you are brilliant as well. Well I certainly hope you guys keep it up, I love your work!
xxx

liralen May 21 2009, 04:11:02 UTC

*blushes* Thank you, very very much!