Fic: I Come To You In Pieces (Chapter 21, 'Bankai')

[stark_black]

Yes, you read it right: this is Pieces. You know that ShuuheiRenji fic I started last year about this time? Yeah that one. x) Sorry it's been so long since I last posted everyone, this story just got away from me for a while. But thanks to people writing me encouraging notes, writing me inspirational fics, or just plain encouraging me, I've got it

Comments

[imladra]

What a way to end this chapter! My heart's in my throat. Wow. Excellent, as always. I love you for writing this! (And damn, does Shuu's bankai ever sound sexy!)

[kerumica]

You are fucking amazing. If I could, I would give you my first born, but I kinda really like her and she is already twelve and a half, but my second born...you can have (if I ever have sex again)...enough rambling though.

I am so happy to see this update, so happy with the turn of things (looking kinda dicey there for a minute), I'm just so...happy! May you continue to be inspired and update this amazing story. Thanks so, so much for sharing :D

*hands you a brownie-cookie*

[stark_black]

*munches on cookie* Thank you! x)

[liralen]

Wooooohooooo!!!

I really loved that moment Hasagi has in his inner world, the peace of the temple and the lake in the midst of all that astonishingly intense action.

I love Hisagi's focus and intent, not to die, but to do what he *could* for as long as he could and to hold up his end of the battle as he saw it. That fits him so well, given how you've written him up to this point.

I love the twists and the turns and the things that seem to be but aren't... perfect for Bleach, and I love, love your Urahara and the sneak peek up the hakama. And, yeah, I love your Toshiro and Matsumoto, they really are a team.

I really love how you closed out Hisagi's relationship with Kira, that Kira knows and Hisagi knows that he knows, and that Kira needed and asked for his help, finally. Gods, that was a long time in the doing, but I love how thoroughly you did it.

And that end.. it's... perfect for how intense the rest of it was. I am glad there's still hope at the end of it all.

[stark_black]

I'm so glad you liked it. You know how much trouble I had with this. And thank you again for your beta, so so so much love to you for doing that.

*hugs*

[liralen]

*hugs happily* Yeah, I know how much trouble you had, and I'm very glad that I could help you in the ways you needed. (sends Jamba Juice)

[stark_black]

XD JAMBA JUICE!! XDDDDD

[kashinosei]

I've finished the chapters. This one practically left me with goosebumps all over. How could you... Oh my, LMAO, damn... and yeah, Thank you for continuing this. I hope to see more of this.

[stark_black]

x) Thank you, glad you liked it!

[freyalilith]

AAAAAAHHHHHH. I was squeeling the whole way through!!! I am SO SO SO SO SO happy your continuing this story.... I've had dreams about this thing!!!! I'm in love with it... and this chapter was the EBST ever. It was well worth the wait (although I hope we dont have to wait this long for the next one. hehe). I'm so glad everyone is ok!!!!! You've done a FANTASTIC job on this thing. Thank you so much!

[stark_black]

No, thank YOU for reading! xD