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stark_black

Fic Collab 'The Nature of Things'

Jul 18, 2012 15:30

Here it is, chapter 11. Sorry for the horrible cliffhanger last time! Hopefully, this will make up for it. Big thank you to SinisterBug for writing a great Zoro, and well, just being generally awesome.

Obligatory disclaimer here.

Title: The Nature Of Things
Authors: SinisterBug and stark_blackRating: Big fat R to NC-17 ( Read more... )

sanji, one piece, zosan, zoro, collab

Comments 7

narcisisticniny July 19 2012, 00:46:58 UTC

I got so excited when I saw that you had updated this fic! Wonderful work as always. The beginning with Sanji and Zoro was very satisfying to read. I actually thought it would end differently, I sort of giggled when Zoro ran out embarrassed and afraid Sanji would figure out. It was adorable, even if I secretly wanted Zoro to stay. I did panic when Sanji asked about his earrings though.

One thing I did really love was the fact that they have been drinking together whenever they go into town. The reason I love this story so much is because it's sort of rare to read about the two of them just hanging out and enjoying each others company. The fact that they talked and settled things over then went back to hanging out was very cute and a nice touch.

Ah, so excited for the next chapter~

melisandre013 July 19 2012, 07:22:28 UTC

I was so excited to read this that I think I giggled most of the way through reading it. Giggled in a very "Oh my god, Zoro is giving Sanji a blowjob and I can't stop reading" kind of way. Ah! What's Sanji going to do when he finds out? I can't wait for the next installment. This story is both hilarious and dramatic; I love it completely. Great job this chapter as always.

istahire July 19 2012, 11:14:03 UTC

Awesome update, totally perfect thing to find after a long day's work. I pretty much just dropped everything and sat down to read this when I got home. What more can I say about this story other than that it's awesome and I'm really looking forward to reading more? I'm so happy that they are comfortable with each other, how Sanji's slowly but surely coming round to Zoro's side. It's really great that Zoro was there for Sanji's sort-of-first time, it makes him exclusively Zoro's from the start. I just hope it stays that way!

So looking forward to more! I really hope those creative juices are flowing strong!

dragon5174 July 19 2012, 13:50:11 UTC

HOLY HELL!! I can't believe Zoro didn't screw that up. Can you say HOT?!?! Damn you guys know how to write.

Another excellent chapter, my heart is bleeding for Zoro and once again I want to take a frying pan to Sanji's head for being oblivious. Thanks for the update I look forward to the next chapter.

makai_thief July 19 2012, 15:28:04 UTC

Omg, the start of the chapter....so hot!!! Thought I didn´t expect Zoro to run out so quickly - I thought he´d go all the way..-but then he´d be probably busted and Sanji get angry and it would spoil everything.XDDD

I really liked how it developed into, well, sort of friendship, companionship? I´ll be looking forward to the next chapter - I have a feeling we´ll see some new turning points in the story. Am I right?