Comments | starjargon: 28) By So Many and so Much

starjargon

28) By So Many and so Much

Dec 03, 2013 23:51

A/N- I just needed some Doctor/ River fluff- so not especially Amy/Rory/ River Pondy. Also, who else loved the 50th? Everyone?! Good- because it was brilliant and amazing, and I loved it and it was funny and emotional and I just needed to share my feelings, so now I’m done with wasting your time on this author’s note.He landed in the middle of a ( Read more... )

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morganfm July 17 2014, 20:15:23 UTC

Oh, I love this one hun. so very very sweet and parts are beyond hilarious (the only water in the forest is "cool" - seriously?! unbelievable brilliance).
It could use some tweaking in terms of what's going on, who's speaking and so on, but the general message gets across and it's just wonderful. :)

starjargon July 19 2014, 16:02:18 UTC

Thank you! Ooh- I'm glad you spotted that! One of my favourite lines! Yeah, I wasn't particularly impressed with myself on this one, but this was my first 9 story, and I hadn't worked out the dynamic between him and, well, anyone, at this point, so I think it came out awkward in certain areas. But, that's how ya learn... I am glad that overall the message worked out, though! And that you liked it!