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Oct 21, 2008 22:26

☣white it out.
PG | GIFT | 767
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[gift], fandom: katekyo hitman reborn!

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frostheavens October 22 2008, 18:15:48 UTC
jahoqewhriohoiq oh my god.

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stargrind October 23 2008, 03:24:26 UTC
afaslkjfaalkj? ♥♥♥ Thank you for reading!

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nerdraeg October 22 2008, 20:56:56 UTC
So, so sweet, Gackt. Dear god; way to make it moving at the end, with the voiceless cameo eduhaehfuahf. /cries.

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stargrind October 23 2008, 03:24:07 UTC
HAHA I guess I couldn't stop myself from writing Gokudera even though I TRIED NOT TO sob. /kicks him away

Thank you for reading, Batman. o/

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gyllespi October 22 2008, 21:55:57 UTC
"It's okay."

Tenth! Open your eyes! Please -

But he doesn't.

It'll be okay.

Aaaaa. ;_; I got a little wibbly at this point, because -- oh, Tsuna :(

But I really loved the writing! The simplicity of it and the feeling of being half-asleep were all very nicely done, I think. ♥

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stargrind October 23 2008, 03:23:03 UTC
Thank you so much! o/ I was aiming for that kind of tone + the keeping it simple part, 'cause my writing is always ALL DETAILS... but yes. Thank you for reading, yo. ♥♥♥

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tragicallyditch October 23 2008, 01:08:10 UTC
alksdjga that was so pretty, so tsuna ♥
i really like how you wrote him very IC and with your own touch. i have a soft spot for TYL!tsuna.
a-and the way you wrote his death, so nice, like it was all a dream or something and just fjalkdjg gokudera and tsuna thinking about kyoko and... i don't know which is more sad, but the entire fic is a kind of wistful yet hopeful feeling and so so so pretttyyyy ♥♥♥ ;_;

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stargrind October 23 2008, 03:22:24 UTC
Thank you very much. ♥♥♥ I was really aiming for a dreamy-like tone with this, so I'm happy it seemed to have worked out. 8D And TYL!Tsuna always has a special place in my heart - and Gokudera, too alfkajfa.

But thank you for reading. o/

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