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I've got you under my skin

Sep 13, 2009 23:02

Title: I've got you under my skin
Chapter: 1/1
POV: Third person
Author: stargirl82
Fandom: McFly
Pairing(s)/Character(s): implied Fludd; Pones / Flones; Pudd; [Tom Fletcher; Danny Jones; Dougie Poynter; Harry Judd]
Rating: R
Warnings: none, really.
Wordcount: 2200 (100 x 12; 200 x 5)
Disclaimer: Don't know, don't own. All lies. Probably.
Author's note: ( Read more... )

pairing: flones, character: danny jones, pairing: fludd, character: dougie poynter, oneshot, character: tom fletcher, pairing: pudd, character: harry judd, pairing: pones

Comments 11

niceandloud September 14 2009, 19:06:04 UTC

thank you thank you thank you. you've just put all the thoughts i've been having for the last days together (LL)
this is really cute and kinda funny, REVENGE FROM DAN AND DOUG, MWAHAHAHA! :P And I feel sorry for Dougie, poor thing, being swapped for Tom because he doesn't move much :(

The end was sweeeet, short but so well described (L) I love your fics so much haha
thats the way it should be, Tom with Dan and Harry with Dougie.

q_rai September 14 2009, 22:07:49 UTC

Awww I love this! Pudd and Flones (that order for me, but it's a close match) are just true love! ♥

Oh, and the changes of perspective are perfect! :D

asu_chan September 19 2009, 00:46:05 UTC

First: I'm so sorry it took me so long to read this (but I was too busy with my Challenge-fic and didn't read any other fanfics while I wrote it to get not distracted ^^°).
And awww...thank you so much for your lovely dedication. *hugs* I'm glad I can make you feel better with my comments. ♥ ♥

Soo...where to start...I'm nearly speechless...because it was also a masterpiece again. ♥
There will be a lot of quotes (when I found them), just a warning. ;)

What was wrong with sharing a room with him, Dougie, all of a sudden? He'd get him back for sure. Sitting up, he grinned evilly. Oh yes, definitely.
Yeah, go Dougie! Sweet revenge! *hehe*

...though he didn't mind, he had to admit that he missed sleeping with Danny. Sleeping. Not making out. Though that was definitely something he always looked forward to before each tour.
Nawww...cute, cute, cute! <3

He didn't understand why Tom had agreed to share a room with Harry. He had been looking forward to this night for weeks and then the older boy had to go and ruin it. Didn't these ( ... )