"Alone In a Crowded Room" by Linziday

Oct 03, 2008 03:11

Title: Alone In a Crowded Room
Author: linziday
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Sheppard and Team.
Spoilers: None.
Summary: While off-world, Sheppard is injured and his team worries.

why rec'ed? . This is an awesome team comfort story, but what makes it stand out is John's internal monologue. No one knows that Sheppard is aware of his surroundings and it ( Read more... )

team, linziday, john_sheppard

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valleya October 4 2008, 05:42:54 UTC
Great job! I loved the snatches of conversation where Shep would think something and the teammate would say the same thing out loud. Gave me a big smile that John knew his team as well as he did. Keep writing!

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kristen999 October 4 2008, 05:52:42 UTC
You might want to leave this comment to the author of this story. I reced it, but I'm sure she'd love to see your feedback on the comment section of her story :D

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