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Newbie Fic

Mar 10, 2009 00:16

Title: Three things Jack doesn't know about the quantum mirror, and one he does
Rating: G. Or possibly PG, for one tiny curse word.
Character: Jack
Word count: 520
Notes: I am currently on a beta-hunt, but I wanted to post something before I lost my nerve. Thus, criticism and pointing out of glaring errors are doubly welcome. Also, SG-1 obviously ( Read more... )

jack gen, rating:pg-13, gen, jack

Comments 52

holdouttrout March 10 2009, 04:15:28 UTC

Very nice! I like the idea that Jack thinks about all the different possibilities, and what that means for him. Very cool.

chocolatekettle March 10 2009, 11:15:53 UTC

Thank you!

terranlily March 10 2009, 05:36:01 UTC

Your title was a bit long for my Memorable Entries list so I shortened it to "Jack and The Quantum Mirror". Hope you don't mind. :-) This was really excellent. The very first bit was so typical Jack it just drew me in...like a magnet?

chocolatekettle March 10 2009, 11:16:37 UTC

*happy squeeing*

If you liked it enough to memorable-entry it, you can call it whatever you like!

sg_fignewton March 10 2009, 07:09:01 UTC

Oooh, good stuff here! Very Jack-like, especially that last one.

I am oddly charmed at the idea of Cassie reading pTerry, I must say. :)

chocolatekettle March 10 2009, 11:21:21 UTC

pTerry is God, and all should read him. And the thought of Carter explaining the mirror to Jack made me think of the sweeper talking to Vimes.

I'm really glad you liked the last one. Jack would never want ANY Charlie to die and even after all that happened I think he would still consider Sara and Charlie the best things that ever happened to him.

sg_fignewton March 10 2009, 19:53:03 UTC

I've just had the pleasure of reccing this, and I hope you're going to treat us to more fic in the future. :)

chocolatekettle March 10 2009, 23:42:53 UTC

Oh, wow. Thank you so much!

traycer_ March 10 2009, 20:18:18 UTC

Somewhere, in one of the infinite possibilities, there is a Jack O'Neill who has a wife and a half-grown son and thoughts of retirement.

There is. I'm just saying... :)
ETA: Oh, and Jack doesn't hate him. *goes looking for my unfinished fic* Not really.

Lovely ficlet!!

chocolatekettle March 10 2009, 23:48:20 UTC

Well, he probably does. But "Jack absolutely loathes the guy" just ruined the flow, you know? :P

Thanks for reading!