Title: Adjustments Authors: miera_c and melyanna Rating: PG Summary: In the aftermath of the battle with the Wraith, the queen and her court pick up the pieces.
Yay a new chapter! Usually I wait untill the whole story is posted before I read but tonight I felt like going to Atalan for a while. Great work! I was wondering if you get the email I sent you in May?
Waaaay late to the party here, but I've been distracted by my shiny new toy and Dr. Who marathons and new jobs and such. :-)
Anyway, this was, of course, highly enjoyable. I really do enjoy the "what happens next/ breather" kind of stories. I'm so impressed by how dedicated you two have been to keeping the quality careful development of each of these stories. Ren has been such a wonderful comfort food for such a long time now!
My favorite parts of this post were John and Ronon. Namely, John's reflection on the "memorial alley" as it were. So lovely and poignant. In Ronon's case, I was touched and intrigued by the "whoa, I'm free and alive, wth do I do now?" sort of shock he's suddenly discovered.
Also, bravo for Marcus, standing up and saying "I'm gonna do this properly with no skulking." And also for being truthful with dad about the almost incident. Very, VERY brave. Hehe...
Moving on to Pt. 2! Hopefully with some Teyla! *bounce*
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Keep up the good work! :D
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Lord David is a completely awesome OC!
Is it selfish of me that I want Ronon to stick around? (and have sexytimes with Teyla?)
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Anyway, this was, of course, highly enjoyable. I really do enjoy the "what happens next/ breather" kind of stories. I'm so impressed by how dedicated you two have been to keeping the quality careful development of each of these stories. Ren has been such a wonderful comfort food for such a long time now!
My favorite parts of this post were John and Ronon. Namely, John's reflection on the "memorial alley" as it were. So lovely and poignant. In Ronon's case, I was touched and intrigued by the "whoa, I'm free and alive, wth do I do now?" sort of shock he's suddenly discovered.
Also, bravo for Marcus, standing up and saying "I'm gonna do this properly with no skulking." And also for being truthful with dad about the almost incident. Very, VERY brave. Hehe...
Moving on to Pt. 2! Hopefully with some Teyla! *bounce*
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