Round 1 // Challenge 1 - RESULTS

[needtakehave]

.... and here are the results!

Comments

QUESTIONS?

[needtakehave]

QUESTIONS?

Re: QUESTIONS?

[obsessed_psyco]

How did you decide who was to be put out since one person only has -3 and I have -5? Just curious!

Re: QUESTIONS?

[needtakehave]

Because each image is of a different set of fics; SGA, SGU and SG1, so there was at least 1 person removed from who set. More than 1 if more than 1 person had the the same overall score.

Re: QUESTIONS?

[obsessed_psyco]

Thanks. That's what I thought but I wanted to check!

VOTE FEEDBACK

[needtakehave]

VOTE FEEDBACK

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK

[quenne]

I would like feedback, please.

Thank you!

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK

[vixys]

I'd like feedback please, if that's okay, for vixys. ♥

Re: VOTE FEEDBACK

[geonncannon]

geonncannon

:D

[quenne]

I wrote The Little Things, gen, Cadman, Chuck, Miko, Atlantis. I'd love any thoughts anyone might have had. Concrit most welcome. Thanks!

[vixys]

My favourite part of your fic was the line "Thursdays are a lie". That's very Atlantis, and very sci-fi. The last line was beautifully melancholy, too. My only criticism would be that there's a certain imbalance between the sections--Laura and Chuck seem to get more attention, as it were, than Miko and Atlantis--but it works, in a way.

(I really enjoyed your entry, btw.) ♥

[quenne]

Thank you! I did cut out a fair amount of rambling in Miko's section, so I totally understand your crit (I would have liked to have fleshed her out more, but it wasn't working on the day it was due, you know how that is). And Atlantis really was just supposed to be a closer, so there wouldn't have been more than that, which would have worked better if Miko's section had been more substantial.

Thank you so much for taking the time to comment and give me your crit (and tell me what you liked ♥) - I really appreciate it.

[vixys]

I understand the Atlantis line as a closer, actually, and the last fragment of that part works perfectly. So, yes. :D

No problem! (I actually adore critting people, so it's like a sweetshop for me right now. Is that weird? Probably. ;D) ♥

[vixys]

I wrote world, put on pause, and I'd appreciate any thoughts you guys had on it. From the voting table, there were some mixed reactions! :D Concrit is more than appreciated. ♥

[schneefink]

I adore well-done death fics, and this one was very good. You showed just enough to really convey their pain. IMO it was unnecessary to have Rodney & Ronon killed by zombies of all things, but it´s understandable if you used it for a bingo card. I liked the ending as well: nothing got magically better, but they´re starting to get there. A little bit too melodramatic in some places, but nothing too serious.
Hope that´s what you´re looking for. ;-)

[vixys]

Just what I was looking for! :D

As for the sodding zombies... It was the easiest way to get that square of the bingo card written, because they're not really there for much, thank god. (I have problems with those particular creatures. But, anyway, tmi.)

Thank you! ♥

[juliet316]

I agree that perhaps killing both Rodney and Ronan was a bit much, but you showed the aftermath of everybody's grief brilliantly, especially Teyla and John's.

[galaxy_song]

I wrote Wednesday any feed back either way please:)

[vixys]

I like the little realisms of Atlantis in your fic: how nothing ever goes right there; and John's lack of use of his office ("Rodney wasn't sure why he even had one" was particularly amusing). However, there's a clumsiness to your sentences/dialogue that detracts from the overall quality, and Ronon reading what I assume is an Earth women's magazine is, to be honest, very OOC. (I get that it's something he's supposed to be embarrassed about in the fic, but the Ronon we see onscreen would not be interested in that kind of magazine - I suspect he'd rather be sparring than reading about Earth fashions.)

That okay? ♥

[galaxy_song]

Hey I appreciate your honesty:)

I'm not used to writing short fics and I just kept writing and when was finished realised I was almost 1000 words over so had to do a lot of editng:)

I understand what your saying about Ronnon being occ.

In future I think I will need to still to short and simple.

Thanks for feedback:)

[vixys]

The word limit is definitely the hardest part about this challenge, so I know what you mean about the editing process.

Any time. *hugs* ♥