World's End - Chapter Two

[stargate_inside]

 
So this was the man that his mother saw when she look at him and said with a special smile, "You look just like your father." Whenever he had seen that smile on her face or caught a certain faraway look in her eyes, this was the man she was thinking of.

Young Jack sat awkwardly next to his Uncle Daniel across the table from his father as his

Comments

[l_jade]

Hmmm... it takes getting used to to find Daniel also there (in Laira's planet) but no Sam/Teal'c... interesting chapter so far :)

[sela21k]

Laira's planet? Is that where you think they are? Read chapter one again. :)

[l_jade]

Oops!... sorry, I don't know why I think of Laira... I guess the way you describe young Jack sounds like he's doing the farming life like in Eudora..

[visualid_zeta]

Loving the tender scene between Jack and Dana. great job.

[sela21k]

Thanks. I was trying to convey a sense of loss along with a sense of the depth of their commitment to each other. I wanted to show how love can last through the greatest of adversities.