Chapter 35: Daybreak

[stargate_inside]

The first thing Dana felt as she slowly came awake was Jack’s breath warm on her shoulder.  He had wrapped himself around her in his sleep burying his face in the curve of her neck.  It was a wonderful luxurious way to wake up.  She wished all of her days could start like this.

As she started to stretch, Jack’s arms tightened around her. “Uh-uhm”

Comments

[stargatebabe]

Hot and hotter. So sweet. That's exactly how I would picture him asking her or anyone. In the cabin, under the sheets, all man. Sigh. Beautiful. Read the next chapter too. Sorry to see the story ending.

[sela21k]

Thanks for the kind words. I couldn't think of a better way for him to ask her than stretched out in his full manly glory at the cabin at dawn. I also knew he wouldn't do the down on one knee thing -it's so not Jack. He had to tease her with it, make her laugh then spring it on her.

*sigh

I do so love that man...

And don't worry, Jack and Dana aren't gone for good. There's still a little matter of Washington DC...

[stargatebabe]

That's good, because I need my regular installments. I like this relationship and how you have written it. The language weaves a vision of how things should be and how they could be. It's nice to dream a little dream now and then. So I'm hoping there's lots more to come. Thanks.

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[baunyre]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aMzgVshG6CI