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DOMN8R (part 5)

Feb 14, 2015 22:05

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matturemuser February 14 2015, 13:19:42 UTC

Ahhhhhhhhh.

VERY nice love. Messed up Matty with no self-confidence. Poor confused Dom who thought he had it made. Then that irresistible attraction between the pair. Love the dance floor scene. God, I'd love to see them do that for real! That last line bodes rather well for the next chapter. I hope you remain inspired.

xxx

stargarnet February 14 2015, 15:13:39 UTC

Thank you! The next chapter...well...I can say it could be promising

pwopahnetazeta February 14 2015, 22:35:31 UTC

Ohhhhhhh I've missed this one dearly!! I was sooooo happy to see an updafe!!:))
Awww Matty.... You should be more confident!! You're a beauty! And sub!Dom is quite interesting here!!
I really hope for a quick update!
Thanks hun!;)

mcsparklez February 15 2015, 13:45:33 UTC

Ha, you go, Grace. Make your point clear. But Matt definitely needs some more confidence here. Silly twat. And let's not talk about the other silly twat either.

As you already stated the next chapter will be quite promising I cannot wait to read it ;) Be quick, miss!

Thanks for the update <3

space_black_out February 15 2015, 21:42:12 UTC

YAY! it's back!
Oh you and your delicious writing, how I've missed it! ;)
I love the dance floor scene, those two dancing seductively is like my drug, the way you describe it is so erotic!
I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please update soon!! <3

tamarelmensdorp July 8 2016, 13:46:11 UTC

Oh baby :'(. Don’t be like that. He likes you, for real. Let me hug you.

But then at that club .... what happened there ... fuck ... hot ... need more ... soon please?