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Hunting the Pegasus Jinx - Chapter 13 (revised)

Dec 14, 2009 23:31

I'm posting this following Vana's request. You're my muse, hon, and I'm eternally grateful to you. I may have to re-write it again later, it's not quite as smooth as I'd like it to be. Things are beyond crazy ATM, we're leaving for our xmas break this Thursday already due to a family event, so time is very tight. Plus I'm just organizing our ( Read more... )

dean winchester, ronon dex, supernatural, crossover fic, sga

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vana1970 December 15 2009, 02:57:47 UTC

Like it, I would say the point between Ronon and Dean talking after Dean's found the goo and going back to the corpses needs a bridge. I found myself confused at first.

Glad it's all coming together looking forward to finding out about the plan. I guess in the new year as life is so hectic at the moment.

Thanks for posting :)

starg8fans December 31 2009, 21:35:37 UTC

Good point. I've added a bit more to the transition, and edited this entry. Hope it runs more smoothly now.

You're right, life is hectic ATM (with 8 family members of 3 generations under the same roof that's not surprising), but I wanted to post another chapter in this year. And I'm just barely gonna make it. Also, new year resolution no. 1 - finish this before we go back home on Jan. 8. After the next post, there should only be one or two more chapters plus an epilogue.

Thanks again for reading and your comments, and happy new year!