Hunting the Pegasus Jinx - chapter 8

[starg8fans]

Thanks for the feedback, Vana. Here's another chapter to (hopefully) brighten your weekend. I've rewritten it, following your advice, Sal. Hope it's better this way now. As you pointed out, my stories are rather dialogue heavy, but that's the way I see the story play out, like on TV. I leave all the introspection, emotion and angst to more

Comments

[vana1970]

Sorry Stars I've taken so long to review, RL sucks sometimes.

Loved it, god banter between Ronon and Dean.

Looking forward to the next chapter.