Dust and Soot and Silence

[starfishstar]

DUST AND SOOT AND SILENCE

Summary: Sirius receives bad news, and Remus tries to find the right words. A story in four nights.

Characters/Pairing: Remus/Sirius

Rating: R

Words: ~2,000

Notes: Thank you to

Comments

[dogsunderfoot]

Beautifully written!

I could feel every emotion and see everything as it was happening. It made my heart hurt, but it was perfect. You did an amazing job!

[starfishstar]

Hi, wow, thank you for this lovely comment! This story was pretty new and experimental for me - writing these darker emotions, and also writing an "M"-rated scene for the very first time - so I really appreciate the positive feedback!

[huldrejenta]

Oh my, how heartbreaking, yet beautiful!
How can anyone help in a situation like this - Remus did the perfect thing, just by staying with Sirius. Very vivid scenes, just lovely!

[starfishstar]

Thank you, thank you! I worked here to include more small, vivid, sensory details (inspired by "five senses" theme over at RS Games, in fact!) so - thanks! Glad that worked. :-)