Comments | starcrossedsins: Revenants [February 20th] [Gokudera, Lal] [Reborn!]

vicious_lullaby in starcrossedsins

Feb 20, 2009 21:59

Title :: Revenants
Prompt :: February 20th, “The gravitational constant” [31_days]
Characters/Pairing :: Gokudera, Lal; 5927 and Lal/Colonello implied
Rating :: PG
Warnings :: Set TYL.
Wordcount :: 285
Summary :: There is a deadness to her.
Notes :: …h-happy birthday, Lal. 8D;; /is shot

( as though she were a marionette held from strings caught in hands not her own, fighting and succumbing all at once )

Comments 3

aetherae February 21 2009, 03:20:27 UTC

FFFFFFFFF THERE WAS NOTHING TO WORRY ABOUT LMAO.

I really really love this. ♥_________♥
(... I suck so much at giving good comments lmfao.)

tyreling February 21 2009, 03:57:06 UTC

Auuughhh, so painful.

trust_bonfires March 16 2009, 02:51:23 UTC

Augh, this is really good insight on Lal. I love some of the imagery you used in this; it was absolutely gorgeous. Short and sweet.