Here we go round the prickly pear [October 20th] [Lal; Lal/Colonello] [Reborn!]

Oct 20, 2008 23:35

Title :: Here we go round the prickly pear
Prompt :: October 20th, “gingerbread” [31_days]
Characters/Pairing :: Lal, abstract mentions of Colonello and Gingerbread; Lal/Colonello implied
Rating :: PG
Warnings :: Vaguely spoilerly for TYL!Arc
Wordcount :: 110
Summary :: She rattled off statistics in her brain, recited them like a mantra, a prayer; let ( Read more... )

!31_days, reborn!:lal/colonello, reborn!:lal, reborn!

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pekori October 21 2008, 04:03:22 UTC
wahhg Boss that last line gave me chills ._.

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vicious_lullaby October 21 2008, 05:44:54 UTC
*WRAPS LOVINGLY IN FLUFFY BLANKET AND CUDDLES~~*

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kyandii_holic October 21 2008, 09:22:50 UTC
It feels like those words are coming to life.
I love ColoLal and I love your drabbles... ♥

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teruame October 21 2008, 15:28:55 UTC
Wow...just...*__* You described perfectly the bleak outlook that Lal Mirch has. So. right. on.

Thank you so much for posting this! :D

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snarkwithasmile October 21 2008, 18:17:26 UTC
Oh, I liked this a lot. For being prose, it was very poetically constructed, and pretty much every word fits exactly where it should. And it's so Lal, cutthroat but still fragile in a sense ... now I'm just rambling. *cough* Well done!

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tyreling October 22 2008, 03:44:28 UTC
Wow. This is chilling.

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