Comments | starcrossedsins: Keeping the Minutes [Shunsui, Nanao; Shunsui/Lisa/Nanao] [Bleach]

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Keeping the Minutes [Shunsui, Nanao; Shunsui/Lisa/Nanao] [Bleach]

Sep 17, 2008 20:41

Title :: Keeping the Minutes
Characters/Pairing :: Shunsui, Nanao; Shunsui/Lisa/(future!)Nanao / any variant thereof you want implied.
Rating :: PG
Warnings :: Spoilery for Pendulum arc
Wordcount :: 1,040
Summary :: The little Ise girl is, he thinks, the smartest child he has seen in decades.

( Lisa-chan says it’s because she never stops asking questions )

bleach:shunsui/lisa, bleach:shunsui/nanao, bleach:lisa, bleach:lisa/nanao, bleach, bleach:nanao, bleach:shunsui, bleach:shunsui/lisa/nanao

Comments 16

pekori September 18 2008, 02:07:18 UTC

...I cried a little. ;;
The end of this was definitely the strongest part.

vicious_lullaby September 18 2008, 04:02:57 UTC

Noooo bb. ;~; *offers tissue!*

I AM GLAD MY RIGHT-HAND MAN APPROVES. 8DDDb

terraminuit September 18 2008, 03:28:38 UTC

;_; Shunsui~ Nanao~ That was beautiful.

vicious_lullaby September 18 2008, 04:05:26 UTC

Thank you thank you~! ♥♥♥

squidgeesushi September 18 2008, 03:48:40 UTC

*sobs*

Their interaction throughout was perfect and the ending so was very sweet it almost made me cry

vicious_lullaby September 18 2008, 04:08:52 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! I was really hoping their interaction would come across well, and it means a lot that you think it works. ^__^ ♥♥♥

loquaciousquark September 18 2008, 04:38:17 UTC

Wow, that was just astonishing. Really beautifully written: I totally loved the line: "he thinks, I’ve really drunk too much this time. And then, Good.)" The ending was so powerful, too. That last line is just a killer. Gorgeous piece, and I'll definitely be memming it. <3

beautifvl_flaw September 18 2008, 07:49:07 UTC

Oh my! This is just brilliant! I love these three characters, and was so happy to see them in the TBP arc. Your portrayal of them is great, and that last part was so powerful I could have cried!