Reclaim [Matsukira; Gin-centric] [Bleach]

Jan 10, 2008 10:35

Title :: Reclaim
Pairing :: Matsukira, but don’t let that fool you. For them, it’s all about Gin.
Rating :: PG-13
Wordcount :: 2,700
Summary :: “Might help you forget, for a while.”

He said he didn’t want to, not now, not ever implied and hovering at the tip of his tongue, just waiting to jump, and he knew she heard. )

bleach, bleach:gin/kira, bleach:rangiku, bleach:gin, bleach:ginran, bleach:matsukira, bleach:kira

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formative January 10 2008, 16:35:09 UTC
This was awesome. So desperate and beautiful it hurts.

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vicious_lullaby January 10 2008, 18:10:15 UTC
Thank you so much.

♥♥

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libekory January 10 2008, 16:52:54 UTC
Just wanted to let you know this is gorgeous; ouch, ouch, ouch. Ah, tragedy, how we love you.

It's funny, how Gin can seem like the main character when he isn't even here. I'm sure he'd dip his head appreciatively and pretend to be flattered~.

Lovely, lovely little fic.

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vicious_lullaby January 10 2008, 18:14:52 UTC
Eee, I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

But of course he would~. XD

Sankyuuuu. ♥♥♥

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yakunitatanai January 10 2008, 21:19:31 UTC
Aw.... that's so touching. Very, very touching. I love your Matsumoto. A lot of people don't nail her like you do, and I like that quite a bit.

Very nice.

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vicious_lullaby January 10 2008, 21:27:24 UTC
I love your Matsumoto. A lot of people don't nail her like you do, and I like that quite a bit.
And you just made my day. ♥

Thank youuuuu. ^__^

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yakunitatanai January 10 2008, 22:31:35 UTC
:D~ I'm glad to make your day!!

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stace_s January 10 2008, 22:41:05 UTC
nailing Matsumoto would make anyone's day! XD

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stace_s January 10 2008, 22:40:02 UTC
I should definitely have read this before reading your personal posts (they made me teary too =<) but maybe being sad made this better ^^;

Anywho, I absolutely LOVED this (though it sounded dirtier on AIM! XD)Your characterization was dead on, loved Matsumoto, wanted to kick Kira (but I always want to kick him, so it means you did a very good job <3). I especially loved the parts where Matsumoto talks about how bad he was at sex when they were younger and the comparison of Gin to an addiction. ALL of their conversations were very interesting but those two snippets were my favorites.

There was Hinamori, and he had desperately wanted to confide in her and let her do the same

For some reason, in my pervy brain (not realizing that in the story Kira and Matsumoto hadn't been sleeping together yet, ^^; my bad) I thought he meant he wanted to go get comfortsex! from her too and I was like "you little pervert!" XD

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vicious_lullaby January 11 2008, 07:00:00 UTC
Ahaha, yeah, might've been a good idea. (On the bright side, at least I've always got writing to distract myself with.)

Yay! :D (Hah, I said the sex didn't take up a whole lot of it! XD) Sankyuuuuu~~. ♥♥♥ I'm glad it passes inspection, even if you do want to kick poor Kira. XD;

For some reason, in my pervy brain (not realizing that in the story Kira and Matsumoto hadn't been sleeping together yet, ^^; my bad) I thought he meant he wanted to go get comfortsex! from her too and I was like "you little pervert!" XD
LOL ILU, that wins. XDXDXD With Gin gone, someone needs to become the new pimp of the Soul Society! :D

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stace_s January 13 2008, 04:47:40 UTC
Ahaha, yeah, might've been a good idea. (On the bright side, at least I've always got writing to distract myself with.)

Very true. You will NEVER run out of writing to do so long as I have my way. You will live forever writing page after page after page.... XD

I'm glad it passes inspection, even if you do want to kick poor Kira. XD;

Of course it does, I love all your writing even if it's about characters I want to kick. XD

LOL ILU, that wins. XDXDXD With Gin gone, someone needs to become the new pimp of the Soul Society! :D

ILU2 XD And SS DOES need a new pimp! I can see Hisagi going in to turn in his app and being informed by Kira---

HISAGI: What do you mean the position has been filled?!
KIRA: Sorry, they picked the new pimp this morning
HISAGI: GFD!!! Who?
KIRA:.... well, *mumbles* me.

XD

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animationgrl January 28 2008, 10:55:04 UTC
I just recently got into this pairing, and this is actually the first fanfic that I've ever read on the two of them. I have to say, I am beyond pleased. It's exactly how I imagined things would happen if they ever had sex. Seriously, this story is beautifully written and the dialogue is nothing short of powerful. Thank you for writing and sharing this! You've given me inspiration for a combination Kira/Hinamori, Kira/Matsumoto fic that I'm currently working on ^_^

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