Comments | starcrossedsins: Satellite [Rukia, Byakuya; Byahisa] [Bleach]

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Satellite [Rukia, Byakuya; Byahisa] [Bleach]

Dec 13, 2007 18:42

Title :: Satellite
Prompt :: Byakuya &/ Rukia; “flicker” [ Bleach Pairing Meme!]
Characters/Pairings :: Rukia, Byakuya; ByaHisa (and maybe Byaruki if you squint?)
Rating :: PG
Wordcount :: 653
Summary :: She always tried to stay out of his sight as much as possible.

( If they walked together, she would pace herself a step behind. )

bleach:rukia, bleach, bleach:byahisa, bleach:byakuya

Comments 4

twistedsheets10 December 14 2007, 02:20:25 UTC

Wow. It's beautiful. :)

she didn’t need the blankness of his face to tell her that she would never be enough

Oh, Rukia. It just makes me want to hug her. The latest manga have her as Byakuya's pride though, so things are looking up for them. :)

vicious_melange December 14 2007, 11:03:56 UTC

Perfect ♥

ladyastharoshe December 17 2007, 09:36:10 UTC

Sad, but beautiful. Oh, my dear Rukia... and poor, poor Byakuya...

bellarukia March 1 2015, 21:56:13 UTC

OMG! Such a beautiful fanfic, I'm really chipper to have found this fic after so many time searching for a good ByaRuki story. This is short but you wrote it so delicately and told us such a beautiful thing that you actually can sink into the narration without even noticing the word count XD. Rukia's feelings and thoughts towards Byakuya couldn't be more precise than you put it on here. I loved all she thinks and the last line was just gorgeous. Very well expressed and writen ♥

I really would like to translate this fic into spanish (actually, I'm Spanish-speaking), it would be great if you allow me to do so, I will hope your response =)

Cheers!