Enough [Shunsui/Nanao] [Bleach]

Oct 17, 2007 02:24

Written for two_of_us_fic~~.

Title :: Enough
Characters/Pairing :: Kyouraku Shunsui/Ise Nanao, and a drunkenly intervening Matsumoto Rangiku
Rating :: PG
Wordcount :: 1,061
Summary :: If he drove her crazy, then wasn't it fair if she drove him crazy in return?

Lyric Prompt :: Hold your head up you silly girl look what you've done ( Read more... )

bleach:nanao, bleach, bleach:shunsui, !two of us fic, bleach:rangiku, bleach:shunsui/nanao, !challenge/contest

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squidgeesushi October 17 2007, 07:06:15 UTC
Aaaaaaaaah fantastic! Very well written, and your characterisation of all three was wonderful.

Have you considered entering the ShunsuixNanao challenge this community is currently running?

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vicious_lullaby October 17 2007, 07:13:29 UTC
Eee, thank you so much! ♥

Hahaha, yeah, I'm definitely entering -- there's no way I could pass it up! XD I've been really excited for it, actually~. ^_^;

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zelha October 17 2007, 11:00:10 UTC
Hahaha! Awesomely written and with a touch of sarcastic humor that suits Nanao-chyan so well... Congratulations!

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vicious_lullaby October 30 2007, 12:51:49 UTC
I do love the sarcastic humour. XD Thank you~!

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ikaname October 17 2007, 12:49:33 UTC
this is great! i love it! <3
i think you've captured how Nanao probably looks at their relationsship very well. there's no need for anything else. she's happy just as it is (and shunsui is too, evnethough he wouldn't mind a little more kissing and a little less smacking)

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vicious_lullaby October 30 2007, 12:54:15 UTC
Thank you~! ^_^; And hah, yes, he definitely wouldn't mind replacing all the smacks with kisses instead. XDD

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unedited October 17 2007, 15:29:10 UTC
Ahh, I love it. XD I love it especially because it shows that underneath her professional exterior there's actually some warmth that she'll acknowledge towards Kyouraku, some teasing, and I haven't seen a lot of that.

The images in the last part are also very pretty. ♥

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vicious_lullaby October 30 2007, 12:55:53 UTC
Sankyuu! ♥ She'd never put up with him if there wasn't some sort of warmth there, I don't think. XD;

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hades3 October 18 2007, 03:16:57 UTC
awww so sweet!

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vicious_lullaby October 30 2007, 12:56:38 UTC
Sankyuu! :D

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