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Hindsights [April 29th] [Shunsui, Nanao, Lisa] [Bleach]

Apr 29, 2009 23:04

Title :: Hindsights
Prompt :: April 29th, “time and scale, both altered out of reckoning” [31_days]
Characters/Pairing :: Shunsui, mentions of Nanao and Lisa; Shunsui/Nanao or Shunsui/Lisa/Nanao implied
Rating :: PG
Wordcount :: 115
Summary :: He does not forget.

( even through carefully crafted hazes of sleep and sake )

bleach:nanao, bleach, bleach:shunsui, !31_days, bleach:shunsui/nanao, bleach:shunsui/lisa/nanao, bleach:lisa

Comments 4

luckychan May 1 2009, 01:46:07 UTC

and that even if she is not yet his, she is still his second chance. I absolutely love this last line. I only vaguely know of Lisa (since I no longer follow the manga as much as I used to), but this really puts Shunsui's feelings for both women in perspective. Really nice work! ^_^

kyrana May 3 2009, 19:49:09 UTC

Very nice. =) I can picture Nanao-chan standing there, unyielding - that is simply so HER...

Thanks for sharing =)

ravens_rising May 4 2009, 10:03:24 UTC

Oh, YES! Perfect Shunsui. Wonderful. :)

anonymous May 5 2009, 05:20:28 UTC

I really feel that is exactly how he sees things. that last line brings it all to gether. Maybe he was with Lisa, but she's gone. Nanao is there for him now and through all that, so she's his second chance at love/happiness. he is happy because she's unwavering and there for him.

I love it, excellent work.

-eulamarie. (that's my fanfiction.net name. look me up if you want to chat:)