FIC: 1991 (04/11)

Apr 16, 2004 22:52

TITLE: 1991: Chapter 04 ( Read more... )

fic: sg1, fandom: stargate sg-1

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angst_angel August 2 2004, 17:00:12 UTC
protecting the aircraft as well as the pilots who would be flying them.

Ooh, I like that bit. :)

“If I hear moans coming from your side of the room tonight, should I just assume you’re telling scary stories?”

Bwah! Evil Sam. :D

From across the room, a loud, high-pitched voice yelled, “Oh, Joshie!”
Another squeal rang through the air, followed by a falsetto voice shouting another name.
“Oh, Matty!”

Hehehe. And the boxers! *laughs* Love the whole convo between Sam and her crazy friends. :)

From across the campfire, Bennett exclaimed, “I’ll raise my sludgy coffee to that!”

*snerk* Ah, those boys. *g*

“Glad to know I mean as much as you as a Nighthawk, Josh.”

How sweet. Must be love. ;)

Carter tensely glanced down at her wristwatch as it beeped, grimacing at the time.
0800 hours.
No news of a withdrawal.

I just have to add that I love the way you get the point across so well. :)

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starbuck92 August 6 2004, 23:57:17 UTC
Evil Sam.

Evil!Sam rocks. I love it when she has the chance to snarky!

Love the whole convo between Sam and her crazy friends.

Woohoo!

I was really trying to show how much Sam trusts these two guys in that scene because they're the two men who have the biggest impact on her life throughout the course of the story. Hopefully that came through ok!

I just have to add that I love the way you get the point across so well.

I can't tell if that's a joke a not! LOL. Then again it is 2am and I *still* have 80 emails to get through!

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angst_angel August 7 2004, 20:49:00 UTC
I can't tell if that's a joke a not! LOL. Then again it is 2am and I *still* have 80 emails to get through!

:P Why would I lie about that? *pokes* ;) I meant that you could have put something like "Carter looked at her watch, seeing that it was 0800 hours and the Iragis hadn't withdrawn" or something like that, but it wouldn't have had the same dramatic effect. :)

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d'oh! starbuck92 August 8 2004, 21:15:07 UTC
Hey, I did say it was 2am!! My thought processes aren't exactly up to form at that time of the day/night!

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