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cap_scaleman March 10 2007, 11:48:39 UTC
It's not a short fiction, it is Devo! ;)

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stanleylieber March 10 2007, 12:12:54 UTC
dot dot dot

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cap_scaleman March 10 2007, 13:19:28 UTC
I was thinking of the red hat the man in the picture is wearing.

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bopscotch March 10 2007, 22:44:46 UTC
Not Devo. Close though!


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iampixiedust March 10 2007, 15:03:53 UTC
Good reading for a Satruday morning. Nice style you're developing. I'd favor to sprinkle it with a bit more philosophy, but I guess that's your choice.

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stanleylieber March 10 2007, 23:06:00 UTC
'Nothing works.'

-- Eddie Campbell

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iampixiedust March 11 2007, 00:02:09 UTC
Indeed it does. And I hope it will tonight.

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blndsnnts March 10 2007, 20:28:17 UTC
I enjoy your solid terse style--a way of packing the story down to its most important bits without taking away. I like when young bucks show up in your fiction too.

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stanleylieber March 10 2007, 23:38:46 UTC
Thanks. I was told recently 'I believe you could make a good living writing trash.'

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bopscotch March 10 2007, 22:51:27 UTC
That kid's got quite the mouth on him.

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stanleylieber March 10 2007, 23:30:49 UTC
Didn't you?

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silenceinspades March 11 2007, 02:47:11 UTC
i like the 'futuristic' 1960s setting and i like when you write about kids. though i'm shedding metaphorical tears for the lack of plinth mold, this is good stuff.

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stanleylieber March 11 2007, 04:30:51 UTC
Oh, he was alive in 1960...

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