Good reading for a Satruday morning. Nice style you're developing. I'd favor to sprinkle it with a bit more philosophy, but I guess that's your choice.
I enjoy your solid terse style--a way of packing the story down to its most important bits without taking away. I like when young bucks show up in your fiction too.
i like the 'futuristic' 1960s setting and i like when you write about kids. though i'm shedding metaphorical tears for the lack of plinth mold, this is good stuff.
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