Comments | stanleee: Merry Christmas; Onew/Luna; PG

stanleee

Merry Christmas; Onew/Luna; PG

Dec 21, 2010 15:22

Merry Christmas
Onew/Luna; pg; slice of life; 2076words
In which Luna may not be having a merry little Christmas after all and it’s all because of Onew her own whimsical delusions (of Onew).

( She thinks through the list of ‘O’s she knows again but the more she thinks, the more likely it’s Onew who would’ve done something like this. )

rating: pg, !fanfic, genre: slice of life, member: luna, pairing:onew/luna, crossover!fanfic member: onew, member: onew

Comments 25

pauperplanes December 23 2010, 08:36:59 UTC

so beautifully written.
AH BUT WHY WHY WHY WHY THAT ENDING T T
broke my heart, but it's really well done. (:

stanleee December 24 2010, 02:04:01 UTC

;___; BAW I don't know myself.
/fixes your heart up ♥
thanks for reading and commenting love, have a great Christmas!

silk_pages December 24 2010, 01:06:42 UTC

Merry Christmas to you too :D
though is not Christmas yet ._____.

what can I say? This was so sweet, nice and made me smile like Luna ;A;
at least until the end came~ why? why? Why Onew can´t be Mr. Mysterious?
why? *pouts*

But well, I liked the little details like the way Luna opens the gifs~
her feelings and thoughts *^* And the end was just... D:
It was her omma! That would be sweet if Onew wouldn´t be the other opcion xDD And Onew is just so Onew Uu

why? ;A;

Continue writing things like this. You're amazing!

stanleee December 24 2010, 02:08:02 UTC

aww Idk, maybe because life's like that sometimes? sad reality of everything ):
I'm really happy you came and commented again though! :D thanks so much and I'll try to continue with these.
Merry Christmas to you too! ♥

mangatang2809 December 28 2010, 13:03:29 UTC

oh the ending, poor luna :( you broke my heart! i was so so soo excited for the next part and then BAM! omma O_O lol!

stanleee December 29 2010, 12:21:14 UTC

I'm sorry I did! /mending your heart
aww, I know this anti-climax was really bad lol! thank you for reading and commenting though(:

marsyaf_love88 January 1 2011, 17:18:18 UTC

oh u. u have to fix my broken heart now.
this is like totally unexpected at the end.
plz write more of them and hopefully the new one is gonna be able to make me happy. :)

stanleee January 2 2011, 15:41:46 UTC

another heart to fix? haha /heart mending underway
I will, don't worry! enough of the gloom, yeah? thanks for reading and commenting (:

sujudbskgirl February 6 2011, 11:36:36 UTC

Omg, I love your fic! Even though I'm not a huge fan of the ending :p I'm a Lunew shipper, and you wrote this fic beautifully! Please write more Lunew :)

stanleee February 6 2011, 13:53:47 UTC

sorry about the ending ♥ but thank you so much! I haven't been writing for a really, really long time though haha I'll try?

sujudbskgirl February 6 2011, 14:25:37 UTC

Hahah well I hope you can update soon :D ohoh, do you mind if I add you? :)

stanleee February 6 2011, 16:31:14 UTC

yeah I hope so too (: aw sure bb, I don't mind at all!