Comments | standardtoaster: and another!

standardtoaster

and another!

Aug 04, 2008 02:22

Another extended Porn Battle piece. I was actually aiming to keep this one at one-comment levels but it's like 200 words over, so apparentally I'm incapable LOL. New fandom for me so I don't know how well this works but I'm oddly proud of it.

( Carnal, Dexter, Dexter/Deb, undeniable )

porn battle

Comments 7

ginevra_alessa August 4 2008, 03:43:05 UTC

Oh, this is perfect!!! :)
Thank you for writing my prompt hehe

miss_universe93 August 4 2008, 15:07:20 UTC

I'm so glad you think so! Thank you! :D

graziaplena October 4 2008, 04:05:18 UTC

I found a link to this on oxoniensis's porn battle website... I-I just love this. You get Dexter's voice and the bond between him and Deb so right. :D

miss_universe93 October 4 2008, 09:52:38 UTC

Thank you so much! This was a lovely comment to find in my inbox :D

sybaryte February 10 2009, 08:18:00 UTC

*meep!* This rocks! You rock!

devlinacardigan August 3 2009, 04:59:30 UTC

I really love dex/deb fics even though I feel like I shouldn't. Something about them is just so hot and right and tawdry that I can't stay away, especially when they're as well written as this one. I love how you've written his voice as sounding so detatched but his actions are so definitely of the world...I really like how you showed the discnnect between his thoughts and his body.

standardtoaster August 3 2009, 13:20:01 UTC

Thank you so much! This was a lovely comment to find in my inbox :) I love how Deb and Dexter are so wrong yet so right, and I just wanted to look at how Dexter would approach something like this with his twisted ideas of what's right and what he should be doing. I'm really glad you liked it!