Falling Through the Ice (Jack/Liz, bad)

[stamatina_rae]

Title: Falling Through the Ice
For:  Porn Battle VIII
Prompt:  30 Rock, Jack/Liz, bad
and
Challenge: lover100  
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairing: Jack/Liz
Genre: het
Table:  C
Prompt: #5, Writer's Choice
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~1450
Summary:   He shouldn't have come.  They shouldn't have done this.

Feedback/comments always appreciated.
Disclaimer: Characters are not mine.

Comments

[stamatina_rae]

No!!! It's not worth it! :)))

[stamatina_rae]

Thanks! I'm glad it was good...in a horribly depressing way.

[michellek]

I already commented at the porn battle post, but this made me so sad. In a good way.

[stamatina_rae]

I'm not even sure why I decided to write something so angst. It just poured out of me so I rolled with it. Again, I'm glad you liked it anyways.

[tragicbeauty11]

OMG. OHMYGOD.
Totally not what I was expecting.
I'm pretty sure my heart just shattered in a million pieces inside my body.
*dies*

[stamatina_rae]

Sorry to **kill* you. :)

What were you expecting, if I might ask? A happy ending?

[tragicbeauty11]

I always expect a happy ending, lmao.
But because I do, it makes angst stories like these even better due to the ~surprise factor~.

I forgot to mention that I loved it because I do...so very much!

[stamatina_rae]

Sorry, no happy trails at the end of this one. Glad you enjoyed it anyways! Thanks for reading!

[lz1982]

This was so sad. At first I thought it was hate sex, but it's even worse that they obviously still love each other.

[stamatina_rae]

Yeah, kind of bummer to start off your week. :( Thanks for reading, though!

[ams87]

Oh fuck that was hot. Moopy ending but still, has as fuuuuck.

[stamatina_rae]

Thank you dear!

I'm just going to stare at your icon now until I go blind.

[ams87]

Ok then.

[stamatina_rae]

Oh, you wicked little tease! Guh. Just guh.