Fic
So Leeries challenged me to write Noel/Chris fic, and I obliged because I was watching some IAMX videos and omg hot. So here is what you get. What is probably really bad porn.
Title: In The Stacks
Author: stalker_celly
Pairing: Noel Fielding/Chris Corner
Summary: Chris is doing research in a bookstore.
Rating: NC17 for hot boysecks.
Betaed by leeries
( Noel was being somewhat more annoying than he usually was, which was saying something. )
Title: In The Stacks
Author: stalker_celly
Pairing: Noel Fielding/Chris Corner
Summary: Chris is doing research in a bookstore.
Rating: NC17 for hot boysecks.
Betaed by leeries
( Noel was being somewhat more annoying than he usually was, which was saying something. )
Comments 1
"No," he whispered "you pleading".
should probably be
"No," he whispered, "you pleading."
but I'm not entirely sure because I'm bad with quotes.
Chris grinned into the frantic kisses, this is what he'd been after all day, the neediness, the want, the spontaneity.
might work better as
Chris grinned into the frantic kisses. This is what he'd been after all day, the neediness, the want, the spontaneity.
"Please" Noel whispered
needs a comma:
"Please," Noel whispered
All he cared about was that Noel mouth kept
needs to be
All he cared about was that Noel's mouth kept
Okay, that's all the mistakes I noticed. I actually think the characterization is damn good, especially in Noel's case. That bit at the very end is super cute. Overall I love it!
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