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GW - Heero Yuy/Duo Maxwell - Emotions - Surprise

Nov 11, 2006 00:33

Title: The Taste of Something Unexpected
Author/Artist: Avira Jaden
Theme: Emotions - Surprise
Rating: G
Author's Notes: Set post-EW. Duo’s POV. This was written extremely quickly, but I got it done on time. Feedback is very much appreciated. I believe this to be the beginning of a series.

It’s hard to surprise me.

Really, it is. I just don’t ( Read more... )

emotions: surprise, gundam wing, heero yuy/duo maxwell

Comments 8

merith November 11 2006, 05:23:38 UTC

ah... following those emotions! i'll bet duo was surprised! and i'll bet heero was himself too... at least a little. :)

nice start! can't wait to read more.

avira_jaden November 11 2006, 16:07:13 UTC

Thanks for the comment! Lol, I didn't even realize, but yeah, Heero was following those emotions. He's becoming a whole new person.

This fic is growing every time I think about it. :P

merith November 11 2006, 16:11:15 UTC

isn't that the way of it? what starts out as short and simple suddenly becomes huge, complex and takes over your life.

avira_jaden November 11 2006, 19:05:50 UTC

*nods* I've thought out in my head all these side scenes. Never mind forwarding the plot (ie: using the prompts) lets write smut! Or, about previous missions that I briefly alluded to....

*sigh*

Mind if I friend you? I like you're style.

And you comment......which really made my day.

Thread 6

sharona1x2 November 12 2006, 20:52:30 UTC

*follows a link from a friend here*

This is off to a very nice start! It's cool to see Heero not doing what most people think he would after the wars. Something different is always appreciated. That kiss was awesome. ^_^

I like your Duo a lot. He sounds like a very intelligent, witty guy, which is just the way I like him best.

I'm looking forward to seeing what you'll post next!

avira_jaden November 13 2006, 04:18:23 UTC

Thanks for commenting! *dances*

I'm glad you liked it. I usually really like Preventer!Heero, when he's all in control and taking names, but lo, that's not what happened. And now I'm heading down this route...not quite sure yet where it's going to take me.

I was a little worried about Duo's characterization, so I'm happy that it came across well. There are so many different interpretations out there...

And yeah, I'm a little proud of that kiss. *grins*