The Professionals: Bodie/Doyle, Trouble in Paradise-Reconciliation

[przed]

Title: Touch
Author: P.R. Zed
Theme: Trouble in Paradise-Reconciliation
Rating: PG

Comments

[gilda_elise]

Wonderful! So many places where the words are just perfect but I especially like these:

He felt as if a part of him had been carved away, as if they were two vines that had grown entwined together and been ripped apart, each losing leaves and branches in the process.

[przed]

I wasn't sure about leaving that bit in, so I'm glad you liked it.

[byslantedlight]

Oh, you have such a talent for the wrenching of the heart... You know I think this is wonderful - the words of it, but especially somehow the beat of it... *g*

[przed]

I take that as a huge compliment, 'cause I love the rhythm of your writing so much.

[empty_mirrors]

Caught up. And guh. Lovely, so lovely. Hurty and sad and hopeful and... all those things you love and hate and want. *happy sigh*

[przed]

I'm so glad to finally inspire a happy sigh with these pieces. :-)

[faramir_boromir]

Of course he had a plan to get him back. We always knew he had a plan. And I really liked

"You're a right bastard," Bodie said, drawing in a sharp breath as Doyle drew his thumb lightly across Bodie's lower lip.

"Probably," Doyle said, then kissed him soundly...

Perfect exchange between them!

[przed]

Of course he had a plan. And I'm rather fond of that exchange too.

[paris7am]

Beautiful. Wish I could think of something intelligent and inspiring to say, but all I can do is feel that swelling ache in my chest...

[przed]

I'm just happy to have inspired a swelling ache in your chest. Though I do hope it's a good ache.