Saiyuki Gaiden, Konzen/Tenpou/Kenren, Passion

[wordsofastory]

Title: Stirring Dull Roots
Author: Brigdh
Theme: Stages of Love - Passion
Rating: R
Previous Part: 1| 2
Author's Note: Titles taken from T. S. Eliot's 'The Waste Land'.

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Comments

[ranalore]

::speechless with joy::

[wordsofastory]

*grins* Thank you!

[louiselux]

Lovely. I very much enjoyed the other two drabbles as well, and the progression of intimacy between the three. Very hard to do with only 100 words each time.

[wordsofastory]

Thank you!

Mm, true, but I love the way drabble challenges like these work, nonetheless. It's like looking at photographs in an album: most of the story is missing or imagined, somewhere between the shots, but the few details that make it in are sharp as real-life.

Or so I imagine, anyway. Actual results may vary. *grins*

[animadri]

*flails*

Tenpou and Kenren have also become quite efficient at distracting Konzen. Hours are wasted like this: Tenpou above him and Kenren below, skin slick with sweat, or Konzen's own hand on his cock while the others meet beside him, or Kenren inside him and Tenpou's mouth on him, Konzen's hair loose across the pillows.

Dude, hot.

[wordsofastory]

Hee. Thank you!

[mistressrenet]

And now I am a puddle of overheated goo. Such tiny details buidlings to such a lovely picture.

[wordsofastory]

Hee. Thank you.